September twenty third is the last game of yankees old Stadium. Yankees baseball team will have a new court next year. i am a yankees's fan . because Chien-Ming Wang is the best pitcher in their team. i feel very pride of him. so if he has game to play, i will watch and cheer up for him, through he is absence in this year,. but i believe he will have better expression next year, Yankees didnt have good competition this year, i think they will be better next year without
Chieh-Ming Wang.
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Hi Dennis,
There's a few things you need to work on. First, you only have one journal entry so far and no homework assignments or "issue" post.
Second, you have a lot of comma splices in this journal post. You need to learn to connect complete sentences with a period instead of a comma.
You can read about how to fix a comma splice here: http://ace.acadiau.ca/english/grammar/comma.htm
You can also google it or check your grammar or writing book. Make sure to fix this post
Last thing-- I like the yankees too. I hope they don't suck so bad next year!
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