Monday, 15 September 2008

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My name is Dennis, i live in Banciao, i am twenty five years old, i live with my grandmather my parents and my dear sister, study in Chu hua university foreign languages departments; i like to do a lots of exercise when i have free time, like basketball and bowling, i also like visiting a lot of famous places in other country when i have vacation, like Japan, Singapore, Hong Kong. i have ever been to Japan,it is a beautiful place, i have also go to Disneyland and eat many delicious food.

After i graduate from university, i will go to army first, i hope to be the teacher in my life because i like children a lot, so i want to teach a lot of cute childrens, amd i will study very hard to make my dream come true.

4 comments:

Vicky Lin said...
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Vicky Lin said...

I'm so glad to notice that you want to be a teacher and it's a great decision. Sometimes i feel children are difficult to treat. Anyway just to do your best.
Good luck~

Teresa said...

Wow...I like playing basketball, too. I envy you your experience of traveling aroound the world. If I have a lot of money, I will do the same thing as you!

Jeff said...

I still need you to put a period at the end of each sentence. You cannot connect multiple sentences together with commas