Saturday, 18 October 2008
Brother elephant win playoff
Last week Taiwan's baseball playoff has started. the competition is between brother elephants and Lanew bears; if they want to competition champion, they must win three games in playoff, and the result is brother elephant wins. I'm very happy because i'm the fan of brother elephants and i wll also go to watch champion game on next thursday in hsinhuang baseball court at night~~wish they can win the champion ~~
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Hi Dennis. You still need to learn to use a period at the end of complete sentences. If you don't know how to tell if something is a complete sentence, you need to find out. You are using commas to join complete sentences together still.
A sentence has a subject, verb, and tells a complete idea. For example, "I like pizza" is a sentence. "I like milk" is a sentence. Therefore I cannot write this: "I like pizza, I also like milk." This is wrong because I have used a comma to join two complete sentences. Revise your posts to fix this problem.
cheer up!!You can do it.
I am also the fan of brothers.I really hope they can win tonight and go to Japan. Hahaa~~But I have to stay at dorm without watching TV....sigh...I have to wait for the good news lol~~
some of my buddies are so into baseball. i dont know anything about it but i think there must be some reasons, that make you guys watch baseball games at 5 in the morning. peace!
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