this is my first experirnce to have such experience and it is very meroriable for me. i have also saw our country's president, this is my first time to see him, and i will always remember this good memory in my life .
Thursday, 9 October 2008
join world member ceremory in Kaohsiung
I have join world member ceremory for Buddhist in Kaohsiung Area last weekend.i weared business suit to join it because I need to bring many members from other country to their seat;.
this is my first experirnce to have such experience and it is very meroriable for me. i have also saw our country's president, this is my first time to see him, and i will always remember this good memory in my life .
this is my first experirnce to have such experience and it is very meroriable for me. i have also saw our country's president, this is my first time to see him, and i will always remember this good memory in my life .
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Wow...You're so lucky! I want to see him, too.
That sounds very exciting Dennis.
However, you need to take a serious look at all of your posts. You are still using lots of run-on sentences. You must learn to put a period at the end of sentences. So far you put a comma at the end of all of your sentences. Please revise them.
Use a seni colon ( this one ; ) only to show a very strong relationship between sentences. For you, I think you should avoid them until you learn to use a period properly.
Please revise your post again to put a period at the end of each complete sentence. In addition, you need to fix most of the past tense verbs.
You looks chic. Nice suit.
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